<p class="ingestion featured-caption">Nathan submitted his Bumble profile to Business Insider's Dating App Clinic.Business Insider</p><ul class="summary-list"><li><strong>Nathan submitted his Bumble profile for review by an expert as part of </strong><a target="_blank" rel href="https://www.insider.com/category/dating-app-clinic"><strong>Business Insider's Dating App Clinic</strong></a><strong>.</strong></li><li><strong>Dating coach Erika Ettin said Nathan should avoid cursing and sounding too generic in his written bio.</strong></li></ul><p>Nathan, a 40-year-old using Bumble to date, submitted his profile for <a target="_blank" rel href="https://www.insider.com/nato-not-attached-to-outcome-dating-apps-advice-2023-10"><u>Business Insider's Dating App Clinic</u></a>, a series where we ask experts how to revamp your dating profiles to increase your chances of finding a match.</p><p>Nathan said he's looking to date women. He's seeking someone who is playful and loyal. He said his dealbreakers are an inability to see other people's side, dishonesty, and forcing religion or politics on others.</p><p>"I'm a loving guy that wants commitment and adventure," Nathan told Business Insider. Ultimately, Nathan wants to find a life partner.</p><p>Nathan said he thinks he's honest in his profile, but could use help figuring out <a target="_blank" href="https://www.insider.com/how-to-get-more-matches-dating-profile-bio-marketing-principles-2023-7">how to get more matches</a>.</p><p>Dating coach Erika Ettin, who specializes in helping clients craft their profiles and chat with matches, told BI how Nathan could update his dating profile to increase his chances of finding a match.</p>